Again the top photo is of the potential layouts for the first page, with the second page's below.
I feel that the second layout works better as you can see the distress on his face, and his face for that matter. Without the view of his face you can't really tell that he's upset.
I'm not certain with either of these the latter implies that he was just crying for ice cream and the former seems like the adult had just left the child in the sea and walked away.
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